Sunday, August 04, 2013

One Single Impression: Circles


ode to my top
and others

You turn around from
side to side and back and forth
You run in circles
You never get to the end
You can't even find your start

Spinning around with
wobbly axles of your turn
spinning crazily
high and low, always listing,
on the ground, up to the sky

Round and round you go
in and out you never stop
We feel for you top
This whirling's making you dizzy
Please stop your twirls just this once

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Poem and Photo Copyright
© 2013 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

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The word, Circles, is prompted at One Single Impression
Also shared and listed with Real Toads,Open Link Monday.

==> Be seeing you (BCNU), probably after my August Break.

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At Sunday, August 04, 2013 6:40:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

it is nice to watch that...yes!

At Monday, August 05, 2013 4:14:00 AM, Blogger Vandana Sharma said...

world is round!!everything goes round!!

At Monday, August 05, 2013 6:53:00 AM, Blogger LaTonya Baldwin said...

Jim, love the whimsy here.

At Monday, August 05, 2013 9:57:00 AM, Blogger kaykuala said...

Chuckles! In a lighter mood this time Dr Jim! Nicely!


At Monday, August 05, 2013 11:57:00 AM, Blogger Unknown said...

Run in circles... nicely done.

At Monday, August 05, 2013 3:58:00 PM, Blogger Lisa at Greenbow said...

No no don't stop. It's just right for a top.

At Monday, August 05, 2013 5:45:00 PM, Blogger humbird said...

Stop...deep breath...and maybe slower...but keep moving

At Monday, August 05, 2013 11:35:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Jim, a friend of mine wrote a short skit called "Meet Hank Spinner." All about the plates he was spinning, a la Ed Sullivan... and one by one, the plates toppled, just as the spinning tops (dreidels?) come to rest. Excellent use of metaphor here, man. Loved it! Amy

At Tuesday, August 06, 2013 12:02:00 PM, Blogger Kay L. Davies said...

Whoa, Jim, your poem was making me dizzy! Wonderful use of words.

At Wednesday, August 07, 2013 8:20:00 AM, Blogger Harshad Mehta said...

Very well put ,Jim.

At Wednesday, August 07, 2013 12:19:00 PM, Blogger Unknown said...

Happy to meet you, Jim!

Nice spinning!

Watch out not to lose the marbles! :)

Od Liam

At Monday, August 19, 2013 11:18:00 PM, Blogger audrey` said...

Very good, Dr Jim! :)

At Sunday, August 25, 2013 3:11:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Great photo...I know people that spin in this sad for them

At Tuesday, August 27, 2013 4:33:00 PM, Blogger ruthinian said...

great photo, great poem. you are good in expressing your thoughts even for simple things.


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