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Saturday, March 10, 2012

Saturday Census: Got up before the sun

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Got up before the sun.
Here my ditty to run.
Five words and five lines.
"Good morning" I have said.
I'm going back to bed.

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For today's Saturday Census we are to write a story in fives. Five sentences consisted of five words EACH (25 words. Five sentences. Five words in each sentence. 5 x 5 = 25).

For more Saturday Census stuff or how to do your own, go here.

16 comments:

  1. Nicely done.... and how many early risers have done just this?

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  2. I kind of felt like that too. This was really an easy centus, but kind of hard too at the same time...maybe just because my day is really stocked full.....

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  3. Clever and cute and my sentiments exactly !!!

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  4. I see we started the day the same way! Happy Saturday:@)

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  5. Hey, Jim. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. You asked if that was me in the picture. My answer, "Yes, that's me.... in my dreams!" It's actually a photo I found on the Internet.

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  6. Well done! I think maybe I should have followed your example because Sunday morning feels like it has come VERY early.

    =)

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  7. Hahahaha! I feel like going back to bed myself! Great take on the prompt!!

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  8. Thank God you got rid of those squiggly words! And thank you for your comment on my post!! I left you a response. I am pissed!!

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  9. oh i wish i could go back to bed ... it's a little to late for that now!

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  10. Jim! This was a cute little five line poem.

    I felt EXACTLY like that this morning...and it wasn't even a Saturday!

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