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Sunday, March 18, 2012

One Single Impression: Miracle (an acrostic poem)

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M I R A C L E

Magic it seemed to be
Insiders know it's fake
Real people don't eat quiche
All the stones turned to cake
Calling to all the thieves
Let's go through the side gate
Everyone there believes
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Poem and Photo Copyright
© 2012 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

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Pictured are rocks and a C**nut from various places we have visited.
The prompt word "Miracle" was suggested by Geraldine of Take a Happy Break.
For more poems using this prompt word please go to One Single Impression.
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10 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodSunday, March 18, 2012 12:42:00 AM

    This is so subtle and spontaneous Jim..liked it...

    I invite you to visit me on OSI and bless my 500th..post..

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  2. anthonynorthSunday, March 18, 2012 4:31:00 AM

    Excellently deep.

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  3. AnonymousSunday, March 18, 2012 8:55:00 AM

    like the interesting irony!!

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  4. The Write GirlMonday, March 19, 2012 9:25:00 PM

    I love the acrostic poem here Jim. A clever and thoughtful piece. Nicely written.

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  5. Mariya KolevaTuesday, March 20, 2012 4:04:00 AM

    Well-worded and with an acrostic. You've done so well by this prompt.

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  6. Lisa at GreenbowTuesday, March 20, 2012 4:08:00 AM

    This one has me scratching my head. Hmmmm Love your collection of rocks and c*nuts.

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  7. GeraldineTuesday, March 20, 2012 1:48:00 PM

    Very nice Jim...I agree with Ramesh, subtle and spontaneous too. :<)

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  8. PremIWednesday, March 21, 2012 2:59:00 AM

    You have left me thinking!
    Smiles!!

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  9. Lady In ReadFriday, March 23, 2012 7:44:00 PM

    stone turned to cake..:) love it.. that is a miracle, Jim..

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  10. audrey`Thursday, April 05, 2012 7:05:00 AM

    Very good! :) Stone turned to cake is a real miracle.

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