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Sunday, August 28, 2011

One Single Impression: Wheat

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Wheat

beef tomato cheese
wheat tortilla soft taco
lettuce sour cream
yours--I'll have the same except
crispy fried corn tortilla

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Prompt word, Wheat, suggested by Niebla at NIEBLA FOG; A hermetic weblog
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Phantom" as prompt

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14 comments:

  1. The Dark LordSaturday, August 27, 2011 11:55:00 PM

    Ummmmmmmm... This actually got me hungry!! I admire the way you make ur verses 'live' by immersing them in some backdrop - of sounds, or smells, or scenes, or even a tale thats worth narrating. Mouthwatering food, on this occasion.

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  2. The Dark LordSaturday, August 27, 2011 11:58:00 PM

    Oh, and thank you for stopping by my blog, and reading my work. Much appreciated.

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  3. JimSunday, August 28, 2011 3:44:00 AM

    "Where's the beef" cried the LOL (Little Old Lady) in the old Wendy's TV commercial.
    Here there isn't any because it was a fish taco I was eating.
    http://jimmiehov.blogspot.com/search?q=fish+taco (copy and paste the URL)
    ..

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  4. Lisa at GreenbowSunday, August 28, 2011 5:58:00 AM

    Funny how wheat tends to take our mind into the kitchen.

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  5. GraceSunday, August 28, 2011 7:18:00 AM

    Can I have a bite please?

    Very visual.. I like it ~

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSunday, August 28, 2011 12:56:00 PM

    yummy items, wow.

    bless your Sunday.

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  7. shailMonday, August 29, 2011 1:15:00 AM

    That's a yummy verse! :)

    http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com

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  8. NankaMonday, August 29, 2011 10:19:00 AM

    You made me hungry for Tortillas! I'm just grinding the wheat....

    My OSI Post - Millstone is here

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  9. SarasMonday, August 29, 2011 1:26:00 PM

    Wow! Jim, it is sure very Appetizing.

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  10. AnonymousTuesday, August 30, 2011 8:01:00 AM

    nice!!

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  11. Cassiopeia RisesTuesday, August 30, 2011 3:42:00 PM

    Jim my friend, you make me hungry. Very clever. Nice Haiku.


    Melanie

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  12. SandyCarlsonTuesday, August 30, 2011 4:29:00 PM

    A thoroughly delicious, satisfying poem, Jim.

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  13. gelThursday, September 01, 2011 9:54:00 PM

    ooh i'm hungry, now Jim! that photo adds to the senses your words evoke. (i remember that commercial!)

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  14. vivinfranceThursday, September 01, 2011 10:52:00 PM

    a salivating tanka!

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