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Sunday, July 17, 2011

One Single Impression: Phantom

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The Phantom

beware the phantom
comes at midnight regular
knows your every inch


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©2007, 2011 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, Wind, suggested by Felicity at The Confessions of a Philosophy Junkie
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Phantom" as prompt

Phantom: Ghost, in traditional belief, a physical manifestation of the soul or spirit of a deceased person (Wikipedia)
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousSunday, July 17, 2011 8:21:00 AM

    Hi, Jim. :)

    Wonderful senryu. Made my skin crawl.

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherSunday, July 17, 2011 9:18:00 AM

    That's a huge amount of time between midnight and 8. Does the phantom need to give himself a lot of leeway to do his mischief?:-)

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  3. UnknownSunday, July 17, 2011 8:19:00 PM

    Whoa, Jim! This one gave me the creeps. You mad a big impression with very few words. I like that... no waste.

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  4. SandyCarlsonSunday, July 17, 2011 10:10:00 PM

    Indeed. Yet we must take the test!

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  5. Ramesh SoodMonday, July 18, 2011 8:20:00 AM

    Must be true for many of us.. Loved it Jim..

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  6. Harshad MehtaTuesday, July 19, 2011 7:18:00 AM

    Who is scared? Let me pass test first.

    Nice one.

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  7. AnonymousWednesday, July 20, 2011 6:05:00 AM

    It's always at the bewitching hour... :) I liked this one! Creepy...

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  8. ms pieWednesday, July 20, 2011 6:13:00 PM

    i found this so subtle and oh so comical... and the picture makes it all the more real....

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  9. DianneWednesday, July 27, 2011 7:59:00 AM

    I was visiting the mid week posts and thinking of you
    hope all is well
    Hope sends hugs

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