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Sunday, June 19, 2011

One Single Impression: Wind

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Wind

Blowing wind gently brush my hair
I love feeling your warm air rush

Misty morning I feel your kiss
Wet slobbers of love on my face

Gentle breeze noontime in the shade
Hugs with my drinks afternoon puffs

Evening cool your slaps leave me cold
I long no more for your embrace

Loath your ilk fresh and warm no more
Fickle wind it's over, goodbye

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Prompt word, Wind, suggested by Dani at haiku love songs
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15 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodSaturday, June 18, 2011 11:51:00 PM

    What a journey with the wind.. Wow!!! Thanks Jim..

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  2. AnonymousSaturday, June 18, 2011 11:59:00 PM

    You made the wind your human companion. Love the visual words.

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  3. JimSunday, June 19, 2011 12:00:00 AM

    I couldn't decide myself, whether it was a 'one night stand' or a 'whirlwind affair.' Perhaps I should have stretched it out.
    Also 'the wind' could be an allegory for ...
    ..

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  4. Harshad MehtaSunday, June 19, 2011 2:04:00 AM

    Jim, I was looking forward to a romantic ending. It turned out to be an anticlimax!

    You sure have ways to surprise your readers.

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  5. AmitySunday, June 19, 2011 8:42:00 AM

    Hmmm..whirlwind affair...is it suggestive of the word?

    As I was reading your take, I was thinking you also have written in the way I have written mine!

    But it is very nice, allegory of what!

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  6. AnonymousSunday, June 19, 2011 1:45:00 PM

    enjoying the wind...so nice!!

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  7. GeraldineSunday, June 19, 2011 1:58:00 PM

    A journey with the wind, I agree with Ramesh, nice work Jim!

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  8. Cassiopeia RisesSunday, June 19, 2011 3:59:00 PM

    Jim my friend what a wonderful Haiku. You paint a lovely picture. So calm and real. Love it!


    Melanie

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  9. Sherri B.Sunday, June 19, 2011 7:07:00 PM

    This was wonderful! I loved your visual imagery...you are very lucky to live near such a beautiful pond.

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  10. The PoetSunday, June 19, 2011 9:23:00 PM

    An affair with the wind...nice one!

    Thanks for sharing.

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  11. Tumblewords:Sunday, June 19, 2011 10:26:00 PM

    I love the transition - a delightful read!

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  12. SandyCarlsonMonday, June 20, 2011 3:13:00 PM

    So it goes with that fickle wind! You just never know from one moment to the next. I sure did like that.

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  13. UnknownMonday, June 20, 2011 6:12:00 PM

    The path taken and the ending are quite surprising.

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/20/bella/

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  14. The Write GirlTuesday, June 21, 2011 8:50:00 PM

    I love the humor again in your poetry Jim. So refreshing. When you said slobbery kisses, I was thinking of a dog. Loving the wind cannot last long I suppose. Nicely written!

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  15. PattiWednesday, June 22, 2011 6:50:00 AM

    As usual- your wit came through loud and clear- love the "wet slobbers"....such imagery and implied symbolism! Have a great week~

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