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Sunday, March 20, 2011

One Single Impression: Sarcastic (an Acrostic)

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SARCASTIC

She at golf was not so very good
Able father helped as best he could

Right hand placed bottom first on your club
Club behind the ball just off the ground
Address ball with feet in line with pin
Swing up hips sway back sway hips swing down
Take practice swing move back keep your line
I'll keep eyes on ball—your swing was fine

Can't find my ball—O Dad that was good

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© 2011 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, Sarcastic, suggested by Priyanka Bhowmick at Lens and Verses
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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousSunday, March 20, 2011 12:04:00 AM

    Gee, I think you talking to my husband, sounds like something he would say/do. Very creatively done Jim and I bet I know what you were doing today.

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  2. Ramesh SoodSunday, March 20, 2011 12:12:00 AM

    Well, what do I say.. you are indeed a very creative soul..Golf? What a game that is..

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  3. Harshad MehtaSunday, March 20, 2011 12:39:00 AM

    O That was good!

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  4. Rinkly RimesSunday, March 20, 2011 12:54:00 AM

    I love acrostics and yours was very clever.

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  5. anthonynorthSunday, March 20, 2011 3:54:00 AM

    Now, I've seen people play like that :-)
    Nice one.

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  6. AnonymousSunday, March 20, 2011 6:55:00 AM

    I enjoyed this...!!

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  7. Linda JacobsSunday, March 20, 2011 7:58:00 AM

    Been there! I'm chuckling!

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  8. Amanda MooreSunday, March 20, 2011 6:20:00 PM

    Jim this was so much fun to read! I almost did an acrostic for this prompt glad I did not I would never have kept up with you!LOL

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  9. JingleMonday, March 21, 2011 1:04:00 PM

    creative and apt one..
    Happy Monday.

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  10. UnknownMonday, March 21, 2011 4:28:00 PM

    I am always intrigued by acrostics. This is no exception. Play ball!
    Here's mine:
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/21/the-proper-behavior-of-love/

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  11. The Write GirlMonday, March 21, 2011 9:30:00 PM

    So full of humor and very true to life. Not everyone can be a golf pro. This is really fun Jim :)

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  12. gabrielleTuesday, March 22, 2011 8:01:00 PM

    A light and humorous take on the prompt. I like how the rhyming structure frames the lesson.

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  13. Vinay Leo R.Wednesday, March 23, 2011 12:59:00 PM

    I think I'd be shaking to even hold it properly Jim :D golf pro not in my resume, won't be too ;)

    Here's My OSI

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  14. SandyCarlsonWednesday, March 23, 2011 3:13:00 PM

    That was a lot of fun, Jim. Thanks for sharing with OSI this week.

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  15. mjs pieFriday, March 25, 2011 10:52:00 PM

    love acrostic... you did a fine job... i like driving the cart more than anything else...

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