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Sunday, September 12, 2010

One Single Impression: The Passing

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The smile

we passed on the street
started with a little flirt
sweet gentle smile
I will always remember
my poor heart went pit-a-pat


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© 2010 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, Choices, suggested by The Dark Lord
at The Dark Lord's Blog; the essence of creation
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15 comments:

  1. anthonynorthSunday, September 12, 2010 2:39:00 AM

    Wonderful moments, those.

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  2. The Dark LordSunday, September 12, 2010 2:48:00 AM

    Ah, sensational!! Loved your take - the fun element, and those special, understated moments, which so spice up things! I was wondering what you'd come up with! :)
    Regards,
    TDL
    btw, it felt good to be back here again.. reading your works is a literal delight.

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  3. Married to SingaporeanSunday, September 12, 2010 3:19:00 AM

    Lovely smile and a wink, sweet memory of the passing time, that should be all our treasure in life.

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  4. SandyCarlsonSunday, September 12, 2010 6:21:00 AM

    Oh, those moments! I love it.

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  5. Ramesh SoodSunday, September 12, 2010 6:41:00 AM

    Beautiful..it transports in to the magical moments of the past..

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  6. Maurice LauherSunday, September 12, 2010 8:53:00 AM

    respectable flirting has always been one of my favorite hobbies - great take on the theme

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  7. Sherri B.Sunday, September 12, 2010 3:59:00 PM

    What a sweet take on this prompt...I loved it. I haven't been around the blog world in awhile and it's wonderful to see your writing again. :~)

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  8. NessaTuesday, September 14, 2010 5:45:00 AM

    That cute statue makes my heart go pitter pat.

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  9. Suburban GirlTuesday, September 14, 2010 7:53:00 AM

    What a cute little bee. Was it flirting with you?

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  10. gautami tripathyTuesday, September 14, 2010 11:49:00 AM

    Beautiful!

    I watch while the mountains crumble

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  11. The Write GirlTuesday, September 14, 2010 8:37:00 PM

    This poem makes me smile...what a lovely and delightful poem Jim.

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  12. Harshad MehtaTuesday, September 14, 2010 10:46:00 PM

    Good time you had!

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  13. PattiWednesday, September 15, 2010 7:53:00 PM

    Oh those are sweet moments for sure, aren't they?! Loved it- and the pic!!! Have a wonderful rest of theweek, Jim!

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  14. AmityWednesday, September 15, 2010 10:29:00 PM

    hmmm....I could only smile... :)

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  15. restlessjoSaturday, April 12, 2014 2:17:00 PM

    Aww! Now, what do we have in the 'sweets drawer' this evening? :)
    Safe travels, Jim!

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