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Sunday, August 22, 2010

One Single Impression: Pensive



Antique

jewelery expensive
dear aunt deceased-could it be
come to me I pray

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Poem Copyright
© 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

Photo credit below*


Prompt word, Pensive, suggested by Theodora D. Dinkwell at The Odd Inkwell
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Pensive" as prompt

* Picture courtesy of IBS Pro! June 25, 2009, post titled Antique Jewelry, an ABC Guide (link) (containing an invitation to "Share and Enjoy" [Picture link])

I covet your comments, please. Once again I preparing to travel on holiday. Will it never end? My returning your comments may be 'splotchy.' I promise to take pictures!
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24 comments:

  1. gautami tripathySaturday, August 21, 2010 11:29:00 PM

    Beautiful photo!

    May your prayers come true..

    a trophy

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  2. anthonynorthSunday, August 22, 2010 2:38:00 AM

    Clever haiku. I liked it.

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  3. Vinay Leo R.Sunday, August 22, 2010 3:32:00 AM

    very nice, Jim.. lovely haiku..

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  4. the odd inkwellSunday, August 22, 2010 7:19:00 AM

    Hi Jim,
    great senryu!
    They got it right, Theodora, Stacey, inkwell whispers, the odd inkwell.... we are all one in the same. ;)
    The odd inkwell and Theodora are for my cooler, edgier poet fans.

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  5. Married to SingaporeanSunday, August 22, 2010 7:35:00 AM

    Learning haiku now, that is cool. Like your writing, thanks for your advice. Wish you have a wonderful holiday.

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  6. NessaSunday, August 22, 2010 8:41:00 AM

    Are you asking for a ghosty visit?

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  7. EG CameraGirlSunday, August 22, 2010 10:14:00 AM

    That's quite the fancy jewelry, Jim. Is this the prelude to a seance?

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  8. Sandra.ifSunday, August 22, 2010 10:40:00 AM

    honest thought!

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  9. MaggieSunday, August 22, 2010 11:42:00 AM

    Jim, it makes one wonder who has the better riches ...the one who passes on or the one who remains with worldly goods...enjoyed the thoughts you sent my way:)

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  10. JinksySunday, August 22, 2010 1:34:00 PM

    Ah, but would you rather have no treasures, and the aunt still alive?

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  11. mareymercySunday, August 22, 2010 5:05:00 PM

    Love the last line - very pensive indeed.

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  12. SandyCarlsonSunday, August 22, 2010 9:35:00 PM

    You have me thinking about how our things outlast us on this earth; I suppose their greatest value is as reminders of love.

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  13. Stan SkiMonday, August 23, 2010 1:08:00 AM

    The memory is the real treasure.

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  14. Harshad MehtaMonday, August 23, 2010 5:01:00 AM

    U r honest here Jim.

    Enjoyed Haiku.

    Enjoy your travel & holidays.

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  15. Ramesh SoodMonday, August 23, 2010 10:01:00 AM

    Yes, with such lovely wealth.. one is tempted to pray..and does discover the lost ones.. Beautiful.. I will call it Haiku.. we are talking of nature.. human nature..

    Visit me for my 100th.. blessings awaited..

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  16. Geraldine Monday, August 23, 2010 11:12:00 AM

    I love this photo Jim, nice work!

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  17. Tumblewords:Monday, August 23, 2010 11:31:00 AM

    Pensive and wishful, too! Clever, as well...

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  18. The Write GirlMonday, August 23, 2010 10:05:00 PM

    Hi Jim,

    Your poem certainly evokes the mood of being pensive. I enjoyed your O.S.I. poem. Nicely done.

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  19. ms pieTuesday, August 24, 2010 6:06:00 PM

    all i could think of was antique roadshow....... have a great tripp!!

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  20. AmityTuesday, August 24, 2010 11:47:00 PM

    Hi Jim;

    This is a clever take Jim! loved it!

    I am late, actually I am on leave from blogworld! Having and R & R with my hubby and kids for a couple of weeks!

    See you in my blog too! :)

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  21. RiikaInfinityyWednesday, August 25, 2010 1:22:00 AM

    Excellent haiku^^ Thank for sharing=P

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  22. Cassiopeia RisesWednesday, August 25, 2010 5:57:00 PM

    Oh Jim, this is lovely. I really liked your picture. That and your wonderful words paint your thoughts so well. Love it.
    Took me this long to find out how to post my poem. I am such a dummy.
    Thanks my dear friend for a great read.

    Melanie

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  23. gabrielleSaturday, August 28, 2010 12:58:00 PM

    Very clever how you left the inheritance ambiguous. What jewels does that chest hold?
    Wishing you a wonderful vacation!

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  24. PattiSaturday, August 28, 2010 8:30:00 PM

    Oh how I love "antique" things...wishing you a lovely inheritance of whatever you are hoping... and Happy Travels once more! How nice you can do that! Take care~

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