Sunny Open Road
Sunny Open Road
Open roads in the sunshine
Top-down carrier's ready
Ready for its sunlit ride
Tall green trees along the way
They wave at the passing cars
Happy to see passengers
Waving back and smiling wide
Thinking of sunburns tonight
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- I am linked with "What's Going on " at https://newwhatsgoingon.blogspot.com/?m=1 -- This poem was to be written in the vein of Imagist Poetry. Short, eight lines encouraged and to be pointed.
- I tried. "to write a minimalist, small space poem focusing on a vivid, concrete and specific image that might convey a complex idea or emotion in a single moment. We need a direct language to describe this. It would be perfect if the poem stays within eight lines. "
Note: The car belongs to me, a registered Texas Antique Auto. It is a1998 Ford Mustang GT 4.6 Convertible that I bought as a retirement present for me from myself. I retired in 2001.
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10 Comments:
Nothing like the open road in a convertible. Wonderful, Jim!
Swooooon...now that is a beautiful car. It must give you so much pleasure. My Saab 900 is now gone. I must say I never thought I would miss it as much I do. Enjoy it while you can.
What a beautiful car, Jim! And how wonderful to have the opportunity to take it for a drive. I always loved Mustangs.
I love the interaction between the car and the trees! Fine poem.
A fine car which must make any ride a joy! Jae
You've beautifully captured the sunny open road moment and the activities going round the time. And ouch; for the nightly thought. Smiles.
Oh what elegant vehicle I love how the trees wave at the cars
Beautiful care and I like the poem.
Fun capture, Jim, and a fine ride you've got there!
Great photo! I always thought of adventure when I saw a Mustang.
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