Tuesday, July 19, 2022

Kin Separated -- a Fractal Poem for dVerse

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Brothers by Marriage;
    a fractal poem 

Brothers
I love them all 
Each different many ways 
All is three, that's all I've got
 
Brothers by marriage 
There's no brothers of my own 
All different, separated by blood lines 
Never knew any before I knew my wife 

Separated they are 
Geography for visits each other 
Though we see them periodically 
Christmas and birthday cards we send

Separated by blood line 
One is brother of my wife 
He is a widower still in grief
Blood ties make her closer to him
'Bout the same as the others for me 

Separated by distance 
Distance and blood for other two 
One is my sister's hub 
A basketball coach for years 
Then Principal of the High School
Doesn't appreciate Sis's and my foolishness 

The other is the Mrs.'s brother 
His wife also died he's grieving still 
Jack of many careers UPS loader first 
Then oil sampler from the ships near to us 
Crashed his airplane feet first, broken bones 
Out of mind for month, couldn't get into ships' holds 
Now he's a piano tuner, expert too of rebuilding 
                    
A short rundown of the three far away 
Tennessee for the wife's brother 
Louisiana sister-in law's hub
Iowa for my sister's hubby 
I could say some more 
Not needed here 

Brothers by Marriage

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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved 
 - Photo at Bottom from an earlier post attributed to Shay's Prompt, here.  Some have said the fellow in the back is a woman, I say he dresses differently.
 - Photo at Top from , in poetics of the description and examples of Fractal Poetry at https://dversepoets.com/2022/07/19/dverse-poetics-fractals-down-the-rabbit-hole-and-up-up-and-away/ .  I hope mine is one.
 - Go there, above, to read that post and here for other writers' works 
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6 Comments:

At Tuesday, July 19, 2022 6:21:00 PM, Blogger Grace said...

All brothers, part of the bigger family and community.

 
At Tuesday, July 19, 2022 8:41:00 PM, Anonymous JadeLi said...

Jim, I like how you look at kin and like the image you chose at the end to represent yours.

 
At Tuesday, July 19, 2022 10:56:00 PM, Blogger Paula said...

You totally captured the idea, both in words and via the poem's shape. Kudos!

 
At Wednesday, July 20, 2022 11:33:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh I think you did tnis amazingly! No need to copy anyone else's. I have three brothers (siblings) I could not ask for any better.

 
At Wednesday, July 20, 2022 8:30:00 PM, Anonymous Nitin said...

I love how you've captured the bond between brothers who aren't connected by blood. It's a wonderful poem with elements of great storytelling.

 
At Friday, July 22, 2022 2:03:00 PM, Blogger paeansunplugged said...

Jim, this is wonderful! A very interesting look at bonds through marriage.

 

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