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Saturday, April 07, 2018

NaPoWriMo 2018-07 -- Day 7, a Poem for Bionic man


 
Bionic man so cool
 
Bionic man why are you way gone cool
Why do you stare and do not speak
Speak to me in your native tongue
 
I'm dying to hear about where you've been
What have you done who did you see
What did you hear what did they say  
 
There's an extra charge in your boost today
It'll kick in at Noon, you'll see
There'll be a jolt, tingling you'll feel
 
We need to know, very soon know we will
Sleep 'til then o bionic man
Sleep, sleep you must, sleep, know we will
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 - Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved 
   (Photo is my PrintScreen photo taken of Kerry's post, see below)
 
-  I'm writing forat the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Camera FLASH! ~ The April Edition,  http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/04/camera-flash-april-edition.html

  - I'm also linked to Day Seven of NaPoWriMo,  http://www.napowrimo.net/day-seven-5/.  If you click on 'PARTICIPANTS SITES' link at the top of their page you can read the poems submitted by other bloggers.
 
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12 comments:

  1. Kerry O'ConnorSaturday, April 07, 2018 10:57:00 AM

    This is a great write, Jim. Conversation with an android... very on point in the Dystopian genre... and I am a fan.

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  2. Gillena CoxSaturday, April 07, 2018 11:25:00 AM

    He dosn't respond to the programme. I understand the need for you to repeat your request for answers

    Much🌼love

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  3. annell4Saturday, April 07, 2018 12:08:00 PM

    Thank you Jim I enjoyed your write...all mystery that bionic man.

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  4. ElleceeSaturday, April 07, 2018 12:32:00 PM

    "know we will" Someday. Enjoyed this,,he does indeed seem bionic,,, :-)

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  5. AnonymousSaturday, April 07, 2018 1:16:00 PM

    I like the language you've employed, the repetition, it so totally wraps this up in a wonderful way. It's a curious thing - and yeah, I like the layers implied, because I grew up watching the t.v. show and all that - and this also plays with the whole "male" archetypal ideas and all. Fun but not as easy as playing with a doll.

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  6. Sanaa RizviSaturday, April 07, 2018 3:53:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this one! Brilliant response to the prompt, Jim 💜

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  7. Sherry Blue SkySaturday, April 07, 2018 4:55:00 PM

    I really enjoyed your take on this photo, Jim.

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  8. kaykualaSaturday, April 07, 2018 7:57:00 PM

    There's an extra charge
    in your boost today

    It is being more observant as poets are to be able to anticipate human emotions. Thoughtful take Dr Jim!

    Hank

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  9. MargaretSaturday, April 07, 2018 8:38:00 PM

    I remember "the" six million dollar man - the tv show- I thought he was so cool.

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSaturday, April 07, 2018 11:57:00 PM

    That face does look that way! Of course, one does think of "The six million dollar man" (if one is of a certain age, anyway) but you seem to have taken things a bit further still. Great job!

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  11. AnonymousSunday, April 08, 2018 6:38:00 AM

    Cool & effective, Jim, esp S3. Salute!

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  12. Paul John DearSunday, April 08, 2018 3:06:00 PM

    Bionic poem Jim ;)

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