NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 9 -- A Tweet Poem, short with a two-poet inspiration

Smart Yes, Not Funny
 
(crass remark, worried)
I say there, smart girl

Looks like were in for

a storm tonight, rain

Rain like cats and dogs

nasty two star night
 

(" the girl's" rebuttal)
Well that might be so

but I'm not Smart Girl

Young Lady I am

A grownup Woman
Accomplished, pretty 
 

(the writer's echo)
Ring around the Moon

Two bright stars inside

Stormy it will be

You nasty Old Fart 

Don't call me "Smart Girl"

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Photos and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved

 - I'm linked with Magaly Guerrero  at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Twitter Me a Gothic Poem, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/twitter-me-gothic-poem.html, 

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 - to Day Nine of NaPoWriMo, http://www.napowrimo.net/day-nine-3/

My inspiration, these two poems, for the first and second verses respectively:
Excerpt from "Dejection: An Ode" by Samuel Taylor Coleridge (link)

"... For lo! the New-moon winter-bright!
        And overspread with phantom light,
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        But rimmed and circled by a silver thread)
I see the old Moon in her lap, foretelling

         The coming-on of rain and squally blast..." 

 

Excerpt from "Edge" by Sylvia Plath (link)
 

"Edge          

The woman is perfected.   

Her dead

Body wears the smile of accomplishment,   

The illusion of a Greek necessity ..."
 

 - Magaly has given us a list of Classic Poets from which we choose a particular poem for inspiration.  I chose Coleridge and Plath.  (Plath died at an early age, otherwise we would be of the same age, as is Mary Oliver, who is still living.  They are my favorite woman poets.) 
 - She would rather the poem be Gothic in nature, I touched Gothic with stormy weather and stereo typing ladies but otherwise my poem is not very Gothic.  I need more practice at writing this type.
 - "Tweets" are supposed to be short, a 140 character length limit.  I did that, 112/136, 89/106, and 94/113 (characters only/characters and spaces) for each of the  verses including my short worded prelude.