NaPoWriMo 2017, Day 22 -- Poem - Open Door
Open doors;
Happy lily ponds
Happy lily ponds
They'll greet me fine today
On my way to work, herons
and grackles smile on me
Little boys with sling shots
Those boys will be out that door
Moms, dads, my customers
Nice for me and for sales
Doors will open for my knock
First
sale my pots and pans
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- Photos and Poem Copyright © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
- Notes:
- - 1) The photo was taken while I was doing a morning walk at one of the trails in our neighborhood, over by the mailboxes.
- - 2) Many of my poems are purely hypothetical if they relate to me or to my feelings, others a mixture of being true or untrue. This one is more fiction than truth as I definitely am not a door-to-door sales person, I am a retired college prof. (Though one short time, I did try to sell pots and pans door-to-door while I was in the Army. I only sold one set and tried to talk that couple out of finishing the sale. They bought anyway.)
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- I'm linked with Susie Clevenger at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, “Bits Of Inspiration ~ Mi Young Lee ”, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/bits-of-inspiration-mi-young-lee.html
- I'm linked with Susie Clevenger at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, “Bits Of Inspiration ~ Mi Young Lee ”, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/04/bits-of-inspiration-mi-young-lee.html
- The instructions from Susie: " ... write an original poem inspired by this Mi Young Lee painting. It can be in any style you choose ... " Susie had met the artist at an exhibition and she gave Susie this lovely print. In it I saw among other things, ponds, the heron waiting at the stream for a fish to go by, little boys about to harass the heron, and many opening doors on all the houses in the picture. It sort of matched my photo.
Labels: NaPoWriMo 2017, Personal-Challenge-2017, Poem, Real Toads
7 Comments:
such a nice countryside image I get from your poem :)
Hah, first sale, pots and pans! Interesting, Jim. I can't imagine that going well at all.
It sounds like a beautiful day to go door to door. :) Thanks for writing!!
I like this take on the painting. :)
vivid imagination at work here Jim
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem, Jim, and also the notes as to how you viewed the painting.
Very true Dr Jim! Sales would be abhorrent to many. Only meant for certain personalities who enjoy being chased off!
Hank
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