Somber Peace
her window's ajar
pitty pat escape in sleep
night rain's peace will reign
sadness comes stillborn and death
A Farewell to Arms recalled
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drops on window run
pitty pat escape in sleep
night rain's peace will reign
bright morning seems different
new day starts bringing fresh hope
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with the prompt phrase, night rain.
with the prompt phrase, night rain.
Would keeping the window closed keep the sleeping in? Perhaps...
ReplyDeleteRainless night
nice one!
ReplyDeleteSomewhat sad..
ReplyDeleteclouds roll over
pressed the wrong button :-(
ReplyDeleteMarriage of image and word. Here's mine.
sometimes we let the night in.
ReplyDeleteNow I gotta read that book again. That is okay, it was good. So are your poems.
ReplyDeleteJim, these are lovely. Full of unspoken emotions. Well done.
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