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Sunday, February 14, 2010

One Single Impression: Gold

With This Ring

I love you, he whispered softly.
Oh you silly thing you, said she.

Of course I do, I wear your ring
and sing your song, a song of life.
Of life and love, babies, children,
my children you're the mother of.

Yes, I remember well that day,
committing you my love to stay.
My token, flowered band of gold.
You gave me your all, heart and soul.

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18 comments:

  1. The Dark LordSaturday, February 13, 2010 11:30:00 PM

    This was touching. A true valentine poem! You constantly amaze with your versatility.. which you attain to perfection.

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  2. geetaSunday, February 14, 2010 2:09:00 AM

    Simply loved this line...

    "You gave me your all, heart and soul."
    Love is in the air..


    Happy Valentines Day

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  3. anthonynorthSunday, February 14, 2010 3:41:00 AM

    A most timely and lovely poem.

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  4. AmitySunday, February 14, 2010 5:40:00 AM

    It's a romantic poem, apt for this Valentine's occasion...and reminiscent of that golden past with that golden ring that is a manifestation of a true, unending love you have for each other!

    I can say, wow...Jim!

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  5. NessaSunday, February 14, 2010 7:01:00 AM

    Beautiful love poem. Happy Valentine's Day, Jim.

    http://esotericuncovered.today.com/2010/02/14/the-year-of-the-golden-tiger/

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  6. Sherri B.Sunday, February 14, 2010 7:05:00 AM

    What a wonderful, loving poem. These two people are very lucky to have each other! :~)

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  7. Sandra.ifSunday, February 14, 2010 7:11:00 AM

    congratulations....I love those thoughts Jim..!!

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  8. Vinay Leo R.Sunday, February 14, 2010 8:30:00 AM

    what a wonderful valentine's day poem.. golden verses of love! :)

    good work Jim :)

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  9. gautami tripathySunday, February 14, 2010 9:53:00 AM

    Wonderful last line...

    words broken into tiny pieces

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  10. Tammie LeeSunday, February 14, 2010 2:58:00 PM

    lovely poem of enduring love!

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  11. SandyCarlsonSunday, February 14, 2010 8:09:00 PM

    A beautiful tribute to the love you share. So totally wonderful.

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  12. shraddhaSunday, February 14, 2010 9:53:00 PM

    sweet and nice!!!

    i love you jim..happy valentine's day!

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  13. GelMonday, February 15, 2010 12:08:00 AM

    Dear Jim,

    Awww. I love this mushy poem, especially "love is in the air." Someday I so want to meet you and Mrs. Jim! That wedding band is unusual and gorgeous! Do you know the song "Cherish"?

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  14. Loch RobMonday, February 15, 2010 8:33:00 PM

    Jim, very well written. Obviously passion and love to that special one. Heartfelt and inspiring to me. I thought some of the words seemed like what you might read on a really nice Valentines Day card.

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  15. Quiet PathsTuesday, February 16, 2010 2:39:00 PM

    Ah, Jim. This is very sweet. I hope you wrote this in your Valentine.

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  16. PattiThursday, February 18, 2010 5:31:00 PM

    LOVED that!!! What a perfect Valentine's gift for Mrs. Jim- I am sure she loved it too!

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  17. The Write GirlSaturday, February 20, 2010 1:47:00 PM

    Wonderful poem. I like your impression of gold. The gold ring certainly bears the image of lifelong commitment.

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  18. Kathie BrownMonday, February 22, 2010 11:47:00 PM

    Very sweet. Your wife is a lucky woman!

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