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Sunday, January 03, 2010

Electrifying ~ Haiku Bones


das ende
.

gray-brown killer eel
electrifying no more
was short circuited

Copyright © 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

Thanks to Nancy and Bruce at Haiku Bones
for the prompt word, electrifying.

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11 comments:

  1. RobinSunday, January 03, 2010 8:49:00 AM

    Fun!!! Love that idea of the electric eel having a short circuit and really enjoy when there is humor in poetry. Thanks for the grin your haiku gave me.

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  2. angieSunday, January 03, 2010 12:08:00 PM

    wonderful idea -- great write!!

    ...still thinking on this prompt myself!

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  3. Nancy Bea MillerSunday, January 03, 2010 1:02:00 PM

    Fascinating response to the prompt! Great idea Jim!

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  4. Debra KaySunday, January 03, 2010 1:14:00 PM

    Oh that makes me giggle-poor eel.

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  5. Tumblewords:Sunday, January 03, 2010 3:32:00 PM

    Funny! A short-circuit where it's helpful to some. Great response!

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  6. AnonymousMonday, January 04, 2010 3:12:00 PM

    Hey Jim, why don't you figure out a way to put them on the power grid??
    Good poem.

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  7. Stan SkiMonday, January 04, 2010 7:38:00 PM

    Must have been a shock to the eel.

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  8. SandyCarlsonTuesday, January 05, 2010 8:52:00 PM

    Thanks for stopping by, Jim. NC is very good to me. And I am grateful.

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  9. Yousei HimeWednesday, January 06, 2010 7:00:00 AM

    I like the short-circuit concept too. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for it.

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  10. Artist Victoria O'NeillThursday, January 07, 2010 9:57:00 PM

    hahahaha!

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  11. Cassiopeia RisesSaturday, January 09, 2010 11:26:00 AM

    Nice one Jim. You have captured the prompt.


    Melanie

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