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Tuesday, December 01, 2009

Acrostic: Out House


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OUT HOUSE

Outdoor privy sitting
Under the oak
Tree's shelter; peeing.

How I like
Our freedom there
Under the stars,
Sharing splashes with
Everyone around.

Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

An earlier poem I had written and posted
for this out house, read it here.


Written for Acrostics Only November, 2009, prompt 6, Humor Acrostic: Out House
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9 comments:

  1. Suburban GirlTuesday, December 01, 2009 5:24:00 PM

    I like the house. Are those license plates for siding?

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  2. MaggieTuesday, December 01, 2009 6:01:00 PM

    This looks like what may be seen at a local or state park.

    Ya made me smile:)

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  3. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)Wednesday, December 02, 2009 5:14:00 AM

    This was truly funny! I remember days like this! We were the proud owner of a two seaters.

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  4. NessaThursday, December 03, 2009 10:36:00 AM

    I like outhouses and I like your poem.
    Name That Christmas Song

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  5. Yellow TulipThursday, December 03, 2009 12:52:00 PM

    nice house :)..lovely words:)

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  6. AnonymousFriday, December 04, 2009 2:26:00 PM

    very nice Jim!!

    i very much enjoyed it..

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  7. AnonymousSaturday, December 05, 2009 11:16:00 AM

    hehehe! :D

    good one sir!

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  8. The Write GirlSunday, December 06, 2009 6:12:00 PM

    What a creative looking outhouse... and a lovely acrostic as well.

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  9. AmityFriday, December 18, 2009 9:32:00 PM

    this one's a clean outhouse, seems like a refuge to you Jim...:)

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