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Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Acrostic: Ice Skating




ICE SKATING

I was breezing along
Chill a popular song
Evening skate on the ice

Skate a while with my date
Kiss her six seven eight
And hope she'll kiss me twice
Then it all went so wrong
I'm hearing my new song
New found friend she's so nice
Gone my date--I care less


Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved



Written for Acrostics Only December, 2009, prompt 2, Enjoyable Action: Ice Skating
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6 comments:

  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)Thursday, December 17, 2009 1:43:00 AM

    Now that wasn't nice, maybe she should have kissed you twice. Oh well, you snooze you lose.

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  2. Unseen India ToursThursday, December 17, 2009 4:33:00 AM

    Nice View and nice words !! Great post..

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  3. audrey`Thursday, December 17, 2009 9:23:00 AM

    HaHa! This is a very funny poem, Dr Jim =)

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  4. AmityFriday, December 18, 2009 9:48:00 PM

    huh! what a mess you've done Jim with your date...

    i know it's fiction...:)

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  5. PS the PratsieSaturday, December 19, 2009 2:24:00 PM

    haha .. this was fun though bit mean :P

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  6. MaggieWednesday, December 30, 2009 1:33:00 PM

    Jim,
    I smiled at your humor as I read your skating tale:)

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