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The Evening Breeze
The evening breeze is blowing
with the moon brightly glowing.
Don't care where the fellows are
they're all so far—I'm with you.
We've got the juices flowing
pale moonlight, sets us glowing.
A little kiss seems so right
not out of sight thus you think.
We'll pucker up, close our eyes,
erase the moon from the skies.
Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light.
My want for you is growing,
the evening breeze still blowing.
Our moon, the breeze, you so fair;
ours in the air—is romance.
This moment seize just for us.
For us love may follow lust .
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Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
The evening breeze is blowing
with the moon brightly glowing.
Don't care where the fellows are
they're all so far—I'm with you.
We've got the juices flowing
pale moonlight, sets us glowing.
A little kiss seems so right
not out of sight thus you think.
We'll pucker up, close our eyes,
erase the moon from the skies.
Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light.
My want for you is growing,
the evening breeze still blowing.
Our moon, the breeze, you so fair;
ours in the air—is romance.
This moment seize just for us.
For us love may follow lust .
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Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
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"Romance" as prompt was
suggested by Geraldine of My Poetic Path
You caught thamt moment very well in here.
ReplyDeleteI hold myself in the doorway
Suspended action
ReplyDeleteThe world left on its edge, still.
Murmur in the clouds.
wonderfully sweet and romantic.
ReplyDeleteIs that tongihts full moon in the photo?
Spirithelpers
Enjoyed how you referred to "our moon", suggesting an intimate romantic bonding.
ReplyDeleteHot and heavy here Jim!!!! Ohhhlllaaaa....love the photo too.
ReplyDeletewow wow wow! :D
ReplyDeletewhat beautiful words!
and nice photo! :)
Such a romantic. Loved this.
ReplyDeleteJim, this must have been a special day. "Love will follow lust". Your words did a great job capturing the motion too. I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteA true moon-filled romance.
ReplyDeleteSometimes it does, Jim! I was reading in a book entitled Play (about the importance of play in our development) that this is actually the natural order of things.
ReplyDeleteI love this winsome, courtly love poem.
Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteAnna
This was sweet and oh so romantic...loved it!
ReplyDeletelovely kind of romance!
ReplyDeleteThose last two lines were amazing...
ReplyDeleteooh great! yes i do think love and lust can coexist.
ReplyDeleteLovely....
ReplyDeleteYou captured the moment well Jim, and there's nothing wrong with a little lust, it's very romantic when you are with the one you love.
ReplyDeleteRomance, a little love spat
ReplyDeleteis good for the its health.
Glow-meter will check its pulse
to see if it needs more sun.
Only way to nourish
is through the man's stomach.
..
hi Jim--
ReplyDeleteyour last stanza...it would appear that it has, fortunately for both of youse!
thanks--nicely turned....
i had no doubt you would cover romance well!!
ReplyDeleteJim, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It gave me a mixture of goose bumps and a blank feeling as I was reading.
ReplyDeleteIt was mellifluous and sweet.
How romantic! Such lovely and touching imagery in these lines...Nice!
ReplyDeleteDesire waxes and wanes like the moon and love endures. a beautiful passionate ode.
ReplyDeleteOh, I'm in love. Jim this is wonderful. Lust love your images.
ReplyDeleteExcellent my friend.
love-Melanie-bhd
very romantic and sweet!!
ReplyDeletehope you had great long weekend Jim
shraddha
i feel thatromantic breeze jim!
ReplyDeleteI liked it- such is the romance between 2 people. And I loved the picture- very appropriate with your words~
ReplyDeleteloved the rhyme. I caught a hint of a little sly fun in this.
ReplyDeleteI like this: "Our touch and kiss then some more
ReplyDeleteright here before moon's bright light."
Perfect romance captured in the words.