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Sunday, May 03, 2009

One Single Impression: Tactile


.......T A C T I L E
Touch tenderly tonight
And make it be alright
Cuddle softly snuggle
Touching smoothly fondle
Inner throbs and pulses
Loving warm white juices
Eat--nuzzle soft mama


Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved


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"Tactile" as prompt,
requested by Heather of A Slow Road
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Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same may go for poetry? (whatever, I enjoy painting with the words!)
[This OSI is a little rough. Sorry, I had the idea but ran out of time.]
Leave me a comment please!!

I will read your OSI by the end of
the week after I get back from France.
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22 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonSaturday, May 02, 2009 5:04:00 PM

    Beautiful, tender, sensuous, Jim. Thanks.

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  2. RachelSaturday, May 02, 2009 10:26:00 PM

    Good poem Jim and the picture is so cute of the bears!

    Hope you and A. are having a blast!!!

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  3. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)Sunday, May 03, 2009 2:31:00 AM

    Jim you know this poem does double duty ... On one hand it's sensual,and on the other hand ... it mother and child ... and wow, you acroticized it! Your creative juices are flowing.

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  4. anthonynorthSunday, May 03, 2009 3:25:00 AM

    This one speaks on many levels. Clever and lovely.

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  5. spacedlawSunday, May 03, 2009 4:00:00 AM

    Cute poem and a visual treat too.

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  6. sgreerpittSunday, May 03, 2009 7:55:00 AM

    I like that the poem leads you in one direction then surprises you with a shift. The bears in the window are divine, makes the viewer feel all warm and cuddly too.

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  7. MaggieSunday, May 03, 2009 11:08:00 AM

    Jim,
    You never fail to amaze me.

    This was a beautiful and touching acrostic tale told in poetic form.

    I loved it.

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  8. Quiet PathsSunday, May 03, 2009 4:38:00 PM

    Very very sweet. You are in France?? I hope it is amazing.

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  9. Quiet PathsSunday, May 03, 2009 4:38:00 PM

    PS: totally loved your interp of my poem this week.

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  10. felisolSunday, May 03, 2009 7:05:00 PM

    Dear Jim,
    you know how to paint with word.
    Love your poem.

    Glad your son is a better poker player than you are.
    He did not bluff!!
    I'm glad on your behalf.
    From Felisol

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  11. david mcmahonSunday, May 03, 2009 9:37:00 PM

    Perfect image of the mother and baby bear, Jim.

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  12. AnonymousMonday, May 04, 2009 7:15:00 AM

    Your acrostic makes me feel all warm and fuzzy, Jim! Beautiful.

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  13. Cassiopeia RisesMonday, May 04, 2009 11:48:00 AM

    Jim my friend. This is so loving and sensuous. Hope you are have a great time.



    love, Melanie-bd

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  14. Tumblewords:Monday, May 04, 2009 12:00:00 PM

    Ah, this is wonderfully well done!

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  15. Geraldine Monday, May 04, 2009 12:15:00 PM

    Lovely words Jim. Well done with this prompt. Great photo choice too!

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  16. Kilauea PoetryMonday, May 04, 2009 5:18:00 PM

    Mother & babe..makes the world go round..this is touching Jim-

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  17. JeevesTuesday, May 05, 2009 12:05:00 AM

    Wow!!!So tender

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  18. Beth P.Tuesday, May 05, 2009 9:00:00 AM

    Jim--
    I loved this!
    Got my juices going...!
    Have fun and a safe trip home--

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  19. qualcosa di belloTuesday, May 05, 2009 9:22:00 AM

    oh so sweet! i had the same connection amias notes in the comment...i thought both of my husband & my babies

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  20. audrey`Wednesday, May 06, 2009 8:50:00 AM

    The picture is so cute.
    The poem is so tender.

    Thank you =)

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  21. Patois42Wednesday, May 06, 2009 5:55:00 PM

    This gives me such warm feelings. Very well done.

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  22. PattiThursday, May 07, 2009 7:45:00 AM

    Excellent job Jim!!! very creatively put! Hope your travels are going well!

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