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Sunday, September 28, 2008

One single impression: Fleeting

That Night

A fleeting rendezvous it was
From her that night her timid call
Nearing her door what would we do

Womanly instinct guides her now
A hug and kiss embrace some more
Touch and feel with reaches explore

No wine or candles here tonight
Hastily those flirtings to end
Harvesting now as frenzied love

Quickly she leads the dance that night
Over too soon memories won't fade
We part with kiss embrace and wave

Now was our fleeting rendezvous
Forbidden fleeting fantasy
A wistful dream never come true

Copyright © 2008 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
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17 comments:

  1. SandyCarlsonSaturday, September 27, 2008 11:25:00 PM

    Sure do love that, Jim! So beautiful, innocent, and frankly not innocent at the same time. Wonderful stuff.

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  2. Edward S GaultSunday, September 28, 2008 12:03:00 AM

    Ah,youthful hopes!-they make great fodder for poetry anyway.
    Excellent poem.
    Thank You for sharing this.

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  3. AnonymousSunday, September 28, 2008 12:06:00 AM

    Great romantic poem yet soft and subtle.

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  4. Beth P.Sunday, September 28, 2008 1:02:00 AM

    Hi Jim--
    Sometimes our fantasies are so much more complete and complex than what we call real-time...

    Thanks for sharing this--I'm sure all of us can relate!!

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  5. AnonymousSunday, September 28, 2008 2:40:00 AM

    Ah, fleeting and wistful - beautifully done!

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  6. anthonynorthSunday, September 28, 2008 3:55:00 AM

    Beautiful romance. At first it seems so simple, but there deeper and deeper layers.

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  7. AnonymousSunday, September 28, 2008 7:23:00 AM

    Boy, that took me back about 40 years, Jim! Anticipating that first romantic interlude... fleeting, to be sure!

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  8. gautami tripathySunday, September 28, 2008 9:09:00 AM

    Love...I like it!


    temporal

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  9. sgreerpittSunday, September 28, 2008 9:26:00 AM

    I like the susgestion that it was more than just the fleeting nature that made it "a wistful dream never come true."

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  10. AnonymousSunday, September 28, 2008 10:14:00 AM

    Wow, that was fun!

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  11. Nancy Bea MillerSunday, September 28, 2008 12:06:00 PM

    Wow, so romantic! And you are very welcome, I am glad you liked my prompt. It is fascinating to see all the different interpretations that have come of it!

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  12. Sue SeibertSunday, September 28, 2008 4:37:00 PM

    Lovely, Jim!!

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  13. qualcosa di belloMonday, September 29, 2008 10:06:00 AM

    flirting with fleeting! i agree with sandy...innocent & sweet, but not...

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  14. Tumblewords:Monday, September 29, 2008 6:53:00 PM

    Ah, the innocence and the not-so! Very nice work!

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  15. sweetytotsTuesday, September 30, 2008 1:36:00 AM

    beautifully written....
    please visit my wordless wednesday.. its up already.. i will not be able to log in tomorrow thats why i'm visitng all you guys today..
    My entries are here. and here

    sweet..pretty..naughty
    Memory Filled
    Sweety tots

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  16. KimmieTuesday, September 30, 2008 10:02:00 AM

    That was beautifully written Jim. I have yet to try my hand at this. I love the the way you started soft and built up the ending. It took me back to first loves, touches and the romance of young love. Being the romantic that I am, I don't believe that the feelings ever go away. A new love can always stir those same emotions in a person.

    I came for your Ruby Tuesday, but I am so happy I saw this also.

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  17. Kathie BrownThursday, October 02, 2008 7:02:00 PM

    Well, now you've got my heart pounding! A nice little escape from reality...or is it!

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