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Sunday, August 17, 2008

One single impression: The Homecoming



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Adi's Greeting

Welcome home dear girl
You've been missing, gone all year
Welcome back, dear girl

Welcome too dear boy
You've not been here for a year
You've been gone too long

Oh how I missed you
Love you both, I do, I do
Cry out, wag my tail

I kiss you and cry
I climb up for your caress
Say you love me too!

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One Single Impression

Tag: Jim's OSI

19 comments:

  1. Oh how sweet! Great use of the prompt.

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  2. That was a cute video. I enjoyed the point of view poem.
    Excellent!-thank you for sharing it.

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  3. Adi's joy is nearly uncontainable! Love this, Jim!!

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  4. Jim,
    I love the affection in this poem. Beautiful.

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  5. Jim, my eyes are filled with tears...Oh it's just wonderful! :)

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  6. That's a wonderful interpretation of the prompt, there's nothing like a dog's love!

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  7. I loved this! It sort of reminded me of the great sticker I saw once that read 'please God help me be the person my dog thinks I am' but better. :)

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  8. me too i wanna cry... thrz nothing so perfect as an affectionate greeting from a loving dog... say you love me too.. now that line put it all into perspective thank you.. when i get home 2nite i'll hug her twice as much... thank you

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  9. Ahh. That is so darn sweet. Must warm the heart to be loved unconditionally like that :0)

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  10. Isn't it wonderful how a dog's greeting can make you feel!

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  11. very nice. :) i like that the doggie refers to them as dear girl and dear boy. and how, not having viewed the video, i only at the end realized from which point of view the lines were being said. :)

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  12. What a delightful series and video. A great take on the prompt. Welcome home, indeed.

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  13. you are going to make me cry! this poem is pure love & joy!!

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  14. So sweet. Animals can be our life and a homecoming is always great.

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