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Saturday, June 05, 2021

Sunday Muse -- Young Hearts Miss Out


 My Girl 

It was love at first sight 
The day I heard her play 
From an instrument brash 
Came sweet and mellow tones  

Smiling not, serious
She tamed her cello fine 
Sounding classics for her  
She knew not how I felt 

Dare not would I meet her 
My crush she never knew 
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 - Poem Copyright , Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved 
 - I am linked with Carrie Van Horn for inspiration from her Photo at the Sunday Muse #163,  http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2021/06/sunday-muse-163.html?m=1 
 - THIS IS NOT JIM, he dreams and has had girl crushes not known
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13 comments:

  1. robkistnerSaturday, June 05, 2021 12:20:00 PM

    Falling in love with the music, drawn strongly to the musician — I certainly understand Jim.

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  2. Carrie Van HornSaturday, June 05, 2021 2:22:00 PM

    Truly lovely Jim! One of your finest!

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  3. indybevSaturday, June 05, 2021 7:36:00 PM

    A secret crush! We all had at least one!

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  4. qbitSaturday, June 05, 2021 8:21:00 PM

    All that listening to Bach Cello concertos so you would have something to talk to her about!

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  5. Gillena CoxSunday, June 06, 2021 5:25:00 AM

    Beautiful song of love Jim
    Happy Sunday

    Much💛love

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  6. C. SandlinSunday, June 06, 2021 6:47:00 AM

    Perfectly captured!

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  7. HelenSunday, June 06, 2021 10:55:00 AM

    This is luscious, Jim .... as is the sound of the cello.

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  8. Marion HortonSunday, June 06, 2021 11:28:00 AM

    The silent admirer - poignantly portrayed.

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  9. ms_liliSunday, June 06, 2021 3:41:00 PM

    Sometimes all you can do is worship from afar. I'm glad her playing brought such joy to you. Maybe one day she will approach him and remove his doubts and fears. Good poem, Jim.
    Li/Lisa@tao-talk

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  10. Susie ClevengerSunday, June 06, 2021 4:32:00 PM

    Oh crushes, they play us like sad songs at times, but oh the joy when we first feel them.

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  11. kaykualaSunday, June 06, 2021 6:33:00 PM

    Dare not would I meet her
    My crush she never knew

    Love the idea of admiration that is not verbalized. Sincerity can still be registered in one's mind. Great twist in your write, Jim!

    Hank

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  12. SunitaMonday, June 07, 2021 2:38:00 AM

    Music and romance...well said.

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  13. .Monday, June 07, 2021 7:44:00 AM

    Painting with a few words such a powerful image.

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