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Saturday, April 17, 2021

NaPoWriMo 2021 Day 18 --

  

Mr. Air Conditioning Man 


I don't fix 'em if they ain't broke he said 

And he reached up to turn his headlight on 

Peering into the guts of the machine 

Wryly, he glumly said, "yours is a mess  


Your doohickey by the small dingle bash  

expired.   The larger one it is just fine 

You're a Lucky Lass, may I call you that 

I've got one of those right out in my truck 


You can wait for me or follow me out 

Quite heavy, you can help me carry it 

And we can talk going there get to know  

Get to know each other better, maybe . . .  "


If it's same with you I'll get another 

Another quote might help me understand 

But if not okay please leave anyway 

Now please go, my husband is on his way 

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 - Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2021, All Rights Reserved 

 - For the Photo Prompt I am linked with Shay,  a.k.a. Fireblossom, at the Sunday Muse #156,    http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2021/04/sunday-muse-156.html?m=1 

 - I am also linked with NaPoWriMo 2021 Day 18, https://www.napowrimo.net/day-eighteen-7/ 

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10 comments:

  1. Interesting write Jim, with some saucy undertones.

    Happy Sunday

    Much💛love

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  2. lol -- it's not cute! You think it's cute, but it's not cute! :) Hope the second opinion was more professional (and cheaper. But it's never cheaper.)

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  3. And maybe get 911 tee'd up on your cell phone.

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  4. Haha - yes, please go, and keep your doohickey to yourself!

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  5. Glad she is getting a second opinion. The first air conditioner man has a broke brain with no integrity. He needs to fix what's broken: HIMSELF! Hope you are doing ok Jim and staying safe. The weather is lovely in our neck of the woods.

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  6. Creepy mechanic...I see more to this story.

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  7. Writing what is not said with pin point precision. Great!

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  8. The creep vibe on this guy, especially trying to get her out to his van, is off the charts. Hopefully he left without any fuss...

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  9. It is like you spoke another wonderful language with those old fashioned descriptive words (I knew) and it was THOROUGHLY entertaining.

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