First grade love
I love you
Without fail
Whole bunches
Really do
Tarts in pail
Share lunches
Me 'n you
Set our sail
Trust hunches
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 20i8, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Marian in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/07/fussy-little-forms-tricube.html?m=1
- Check the link above to learn of the tricube poem. It's three verses of three lines of three syllables each.
- Believe it, I had a first grade crush. How about you?
oh well done - this is great - good use of this simple form, and yeah, holy smokes, this captures the innocence and essence of "first (grade) love" - especially if of a certain generation - I'm totally tripping on the line " tarts in pail" ... this is conjuring!
ReplyDeleteOh, cute, sweet - and what delightful rhyming.
ReplyDeleteLove this one, Jim.
ReplyDeleteThat hunches.. that's great. I like the way you used rhymes too.
ReplyDeleteThis is soo sweet!💖 Lovely write.
ReplyDeleteTC!! Too cute!! Jim you are such a romantic.
ReplyDeleteThis is great. I think of: "Will you go with me? Circle yes or no" :)
ReplyDeleteCute , sweet love!!
ReplyDeleteLovely Jim - you romantic you!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
This is so cute.
ReplyDeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteThis is sweet, and the sound of it is authentic. Love the second one!
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