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Sunday, May 05, 2013

One Single Impression: Feel / Feelings

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My feelings
 
I do feel for you
sometimes I can not reach you
just too much clutter
 
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14 comments:

  1. Harshad MehtaSunday, May 05, 2013 8:58:00 PM

    Good one.
    On more serious note, often it happens that one just cannot express his feelings. It is not easy to be that 'open'!

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  2. Vandana SharmaMonday, May 06, 2013 12:47:00 AM

    :) REALLY NICE ONE!!!

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  3. anthonynorthMonday, May 06, 2013 2:07:00 AM

    Great depth to this.

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  4. HelenMonday, May 06, 2013 11:10:00 AM

    Wonderful!! Humor (?) ~~ yes.

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  5. Laurie KolpMonday, May 06, 2013 1:58:00 PM

    With three kids in a small house, I can so relate to this!

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  6. TitusMonday, May 06, 2013 5:26:00 PM

    Oh, that looks familiar! Wonderfully concise, rich with meaning.

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  7. kaykualaMonday, May 06, 2013 9:33:00 PM

    We often are frustrated with our own schedules that it stops us from maximizing our intended relationships. How true it is Dr Jim!

    Hank

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  8. Harshad MehtaMonday, May 06, 2013 9:48:00 PM

    Oh yes Jim, change of last line changes the meaning altogether.
    Cluttered mind cannot reach out. One needs to be at peace with himself.

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  9. AnonymousMonday, May 06, 2013 10:04:00 PM

    Jim, this intrigued me. The feelings/feelings concept - feeling about for whatever vs. feelings re: emotions.

    The clutter? Ha! Reminds me of my days as a single mom. And the mental clutter? Very much the same, even now (can't blame Riley, she's 24 and on her own!). Nicely played! Amy

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  10. Kay L. DaviesTuesday, May 07, 2013 11:24:00 AM

    Wonderful, Jim. I love it!
    K

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  11. Amrit SinhaWednesday, May 08, 2013 2:57:00 AM

    Time to remove the clutter I would say !!!

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  12. Loch RobThursday, May 09, 2013 12:20:00 PM

    Considering the curling iron and other doodads, I can understand why. Your words ring true Jim. Sometimes the clutter in life and living do get in the way of reaching out to each other. Your poem is simple but very true indeed. Well penned.

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  13. audrey`Friday, May 10, 2013 1:49:00 AM

    Wow! Dr Jim describes the photo so well :)

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  14. Kathie BrownFriday, May 10, 2013 2:03:00 PM

    Wow. This poem is perfect and powerful. It sums up so much in one tiny little package of dynamite! Love the photo too!

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